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Offline Harry Young

Re: NSF Wikipedia Article rewrite, requesting Feedback
« Reply #20 on: 08/22/2021 04:28 am »
thanks for all the input.
I send the entire article through Grammarly and it found a bunch more issues, the entire article should be better.


Offline darkenfast

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Re: NSF Wikipedia Article rewrite, requesting Feedback
« Reply #22 on: 08/24/2021 12:04 am »
Congratulations! An excellent Wikipedia article. Thank you for the hard work!
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Re: NSF Wikipedia Article rewrite, requesting Feedback
« Reply #23 on: 08/24/2021 12:20 am »
Journalistic style and forum interaction - 1st sentence, 3rd paragraph:
 
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The news articles are supplemented by deep discussions on the NASASpaceflight forum including play-by-play reporting threats for special events.

While some of the threads can be pretty threatening, I don't think that is what you intended.

There's always another GD typo!

Offline Harry Young

Re: NSF Wikipedia Article rewrite, requesting Feedback
« Reply #24 on: 08/24/2021 12:29 am »
fixed, thanks

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Re: NSF Wikipedia Article rewrite, requesting Feedback
« Reply #25 on: 08/24/2021 01:10 am »
Very nice, well done!
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